Um, just one thing. THEY SWITCHED SHIPS ON ME HALFWAY THROUGH!!
Eleret/Danar. Oh, I like the little things mentioned about things he does for her. Probably who she'll end up with. They're kinda cute. I like how much he cares for her. But he does block her throwing lines...she can't have that.
Wait, who's this? Karvonen? A thief? Hmm, I do like thieves....
Danar and Karvonen don't get along. Lovely.
Aww. He knows her country's customs and he braided her hair. There's something going on here....
WOAH. Braiding hair to kissing. That escalated quickly.
He doesn't block her throwing lines...Definitely who she'll end up with. Which I'm cool with just...a book hasn't switched ships on me in years.
I think I might like this even more on a re-read, being fully aware of my ship.
Otherwise, writing's good. Story's pretty good. Etc.