Well, I liked it. It could have used the opposite of editing which is something I rarely say. Things weren't there that should have been. Also the romance couldshould have been handled better. It kinda went something like:
Howl: Hello, old lady.
Sophie: Hello, famous wizard.
*accusingly* You like young ladies, do you not?
Howl: Why yes, they are quite nice. You, however, are quite old. Clean my magical moving castle for me?
Sophie: Why not. You need to change me back into a young lady again anyways
Sophie: *falls in love with arrogant Howl*
Howl: *in love with his gorgeous hair*
Howl: *hissy fit* You ruined my hair! I'll never forgive you, old woman! *sobs and runs off to cry in his sock drawer*
Sophie: Why you no love me?
*end of book*
Howl: You're not old?!
*live happily ever after*
I lovingly stole the above idea from [a:Sarah Rees Brennan|836009|Sarah Rees Brennan|http://d.gr-assets.com/authors/1254149255p2/836009.jpg]. Thanks so much!